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March 1:
The first day of March,
A slow one by all means, though-
Plain old Saturday.

March 2:
Clouds
blindly numb
emotion.

March 3:
The sun shone brightly
yet, because of school classes
I barely saw it.

March 4:
Sunlight
Frenzied and active
True beauty

March 5:
A sole butterfly
sat calmly by the window
until swatted at.

March 6:
On a day as nice
as this, it should be harder
to be frustrated.

March 7:
The sun woke me up.
That is never a good sign.
I missed my classes.

March 8:
A light breeze
does wonders when
the sun is beating down

March 9:
Birds gather
in the tree
outside my window.

March 10:
In the warmth of
the sun, it is easy
to drift off into sleep.

March 11:
It must be nice to
be able to sing freely
like the hummingbird.

March 12:
Wednesday leaves me
burned out like dead leaves
sitting in the harsh sun.

March 13:
It is easiest
to enjoy the breeze
by doing nothing.

March 14:
To be truly free
even a bird must have
a home to return to.

March 15:
Littered with clouds
that simply float along-
white contrasting vast blue

March 16:
artificial light-
the curse of being
stranded indoors.

March 17:
Do rocks
that are left alone simply
sit in one place?

March 18:
Self-constraint:
remaining indoors
on a nice day.

March 19:
Moonlight shines
softly on the world
as it slumbers.

March 20:
The winds rejoice
when light falls on
the earth's surface.

March 21:
The hanging blue
sits calmly above us-
spring has begun.

March 22:
Heat gathers
in the earth itself,
warming a sunny day.

March 23:
Easter morning-
yet not a rabbit
anywhere in sight.

March 24:
A sky of
not-so-blue
littered with smog

March 25:
It's strange to know
that anywhere on Earth
the same stars can be seen.

March 26:
sunlight goes
unnoticed surrounded
by artificial light

March 27:
A day with you
brings out the light
that the sun provides.

March 28:
The wind blows
lazily and all I can
think of is you.

March 29:
The blooming lily
holds old memories for us
and who we once were.

March 30:
Clouds roll overhead
setting a light shade
on the soft hillside.

March 31:
Dance with me
the breeze calls
onward endlessly
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Alright! A month of haiku starts here, as I'm entering in the Spring Haiku Project! It's hosted by *Iscariot-Priest, and it's looking to be a lot of fun. Basically, I'm going to write a haiku each day until the month ends, and then I'll be left with 31! ^^

March 7: I forgot to set my alarm and slept in for my classes. Oops. >_>;

March 31: And that makes 31! I realize that I'm about an hour behind, but school work and system maintenance prevented me from submitting this before midnight. :noes:
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um. the second one isn't a haiku...

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Now I'm heels over head. I'm hangin' upside down. Thinkin' how you left me for dead California bound. And when you hit the coast. Maybe you'll finally see. And then you'll turn it all around and you'll come back to me. BoysLikeGirls-Heels Over Head:heart:
Hum... I think haiku number 1 should have more concrete imagery. I started to wonder about the choice of words "slow", "plain", "old"...

As for the second, is it about cloud-gazing or characterizing clouds? Me needs more info so I can understand the metaphor better :)

29 more to go! :#1:
Not bad but..uh...is 2 really a haiku? XD

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I think so...I might've messed up on the syllables, though, I wrote it at like 2 am... ^^"

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XD

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"I think inside the box, it's just a different box than everyone else."
- Jake AKA Sprectra
Not all haiku is 5-7-5, but I can't tell if I've done that one right. I'll ask someone about that. ^^"

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Alright. Thanks! ^^

It's more about how I feel when it's cloudy out. I never know how to feel when it's cloudy...

Yeah. ^^"

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I think it is. I could be wrong, though. I know that not all haiku is 5-7-5, but I'm not sure if I did it right...

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I know there's the basic 5-7-5, but the others are 2-5-2 and 9-13-9. ... and I think 7-10-7...

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I thought there was a 1-3-1 one, wasn't there? I dunno, I'll probably have to redo that one. ^^"

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