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I saw through you,
through your periscope eyes,
through your glass skin
and ice ribs

to your heart, then
through your heart
and out the other side
for lack of an
opaque surface.

I saw nothing in you,
but through you
I saw clarity,
and I wonder
if my mind's light
passed through you

as I walked away.
:icongaioumonbatou:

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Akira means "bright", "intelligent", or "clear". I took the last definition.

I rather like how this one turned out.

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:iconfragments-of-a-dream:
very delicate and pretty.
thats the image i got.

:heart:
:icongaioumonbatou:
Thank you. :)

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:iconyouinventedme:
I love the imagery of the first half
and the bite of the second.


xo!

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:iconiampoetry:
:+fav: and run.

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you decide the taste of my art

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:icongaioumonbatou:
:lol: Thank you! :)

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"One of my first projects as the God of Literature would be to remove all the adjectives from say, Conrad's Heart of Darkness." - `AbCat

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:icongaioumonbatou:
Thanks! :)

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"One of my first projects as the God of Literature would be to remove all the adjectives from say, Conrad's Heart of Darkness." - `AbCat

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:iconagmeade:
This one is lovely. Quite sad.

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:icongaioumonbatou:
Thank you. :hug:

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"One of my first projects as the God of Literature would be to remove all the adjectives from say, Conrad's Heart of Darkness." - `AbCat

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:iconirrevocablefate:
:heart: Oh this is just lovely hun. ♥

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