I saw through you,
through your periscope eyes,
through your glass skin
and ice ribs
to your heart, then
through your heart
and out the other side
for lack of an
opaque surface.
I saw nothing in you,
but through you
I saw clarity,
and I wonder
if my mind's light
passed through you
as I walked away.












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